Monday, June 1, 2009

how is one in sane?
i want to be outsane.
everything not in.
outwards.
out of the wards.
an idea so insane;
to show the insides
when in pain.
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Anonymous said...

Wow, this is real poetry. Many elements are there, like metaphors, plays on words, new expressions built on cliches, etc.

I am impressed.

June 1, 2009 at 8:45 AM

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